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Once, you said that I could love you.
Once, you said it'd be alright.
Once, you said that I could call on you whenever,
I guess whenver means whenever but tonight.

Once, you knew what I was thinking.
Because once, it was always about you.
Once, I made one mistake now everything is not okay,
I guess forever means when and where you say.

A thousand years ago I loved you,
And a thousand years from now you'll love me too.
Forever is a strong word but it loses all its might,
When forever means forever but tonight.

Love, is what I thought we'd call it.
And once, you liked that label too.
Now, it's such a mess, we went ahead and did our best
To make forever something I cannot get through.

A thousand years ago I loved you,
And a thousand years from now you'll love me too.
Forever is a strong word but it loses all its might,
When forever means forever but tonight.

Once, you said that I could love you.
Once, you said it'd be alright.
Once, you said that I could call on you whenever,
I guess whenver means whenever but tonight.
Haven't decided on the title yet. Sgonna be either 'Forever But Tonight' or 'A Thousand Years'. Wrote this for Daniel and Nina. :D
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paradox1208 May 25, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
I LOVE THIS!
and i think that "forever but tonight" is a wayyyyy better title than "a thousand years".. I say keep it.. but it's your choice..
this is the first deviation i read for you and it's amazing!!
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:iconmayaj:
Thank you so much. :)
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:iconash4love:
This is exactly what I'm going through right now. Very beautiful work.
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:iconmayaj:
Thank you very much for the fav. ...But I hate to think you've really felt like this, that's terrible...
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:iconash4love:
Yes, but it happens. Sometimes you have to make the best of it and hope that everything works out to your liking. If it doesn't, then it wasn't meant to be.
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:iconmayaj:
:hug: I'm sorry.
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Paladin343 Oct 8, 2006  Hobbyist General Artist
:nod: i like it.
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Paladin343 Oct 10, 2006  Hobbyist General Artist
welcomee!
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:iconpinky2:
I love it!!!!!!!!!! you ar wenderfol!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Daniel:... ya... mm... I lick it, it's pinfoly tero
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